TENDERNESS

 

 

 

 

 

 

I ponder upon the beauty that is you

Your love is as constant as the sun

I knew nothing of the wonder of this world

Until I became acquainted with you

 

You light up my world beyond all reason

It is clear that you had brought me home

To a place of peace and fulfilment never before known

 

                                 Writing was my solace

                  Longing was my hope

                  Dreaming was my only peace

 

I have a new vision seen from a different view

A bright and lovely rainbow…

A sea of poems and joy beyond compare

Contentment and my cup half full

 

                                          Your words have given me hope to live by

        Your love has given me wings to fly high

        Your tenderness has given me love to keep nigh ~

 

 

 

(c) Helena 2009

 

 

 

Author's Note

A poem from a contest with the phrase "Seen from a different light" ~ Remember that one Sharon from old Starlite!


Thank you for reading my words...

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Beautifully done

[shythatway]

That's what we all want, isn't it? Someone to bring us home, and make us see the world in brighter colours. =) I liked this, thank you for sharing.

[Anastasia Starlena]

Wow the imagery of this was completely eurphoric. Very beautiful. Takes you on a dreamlike journey.

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Beautiful! Very wonderfully written and I could imagine, spoken!
I'm very intrigued by your poetic mind. I wish I could write with such romanticism!
Great write!

[Gandré]

and what would be world of your poetic thought, a realm with sheer emotion frauht?


would it be a world.....with feeling over - wrought, unleavened, with a serious thought?

loved your poem, what a poettes-goddess ur !!

[Tony Hwilka]

Helen, Such a beautiful poem, did you mean me instead of we in the next to the last line?

[just is]

Your words have given me hope to live by
Your love has given we wings to fly high
Your tenderness has given me love to keep nigh ~

Now this is so beuatiful, I love these lines here.
You write so beautiful and amazing.....Kim

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

this is certainly very tender and ever so loving...

Your words have given me hope to live by
Your love has given we wings to fly high
Your tenderness has given me love to keep nigh ~

that ending is so stunning and breathtaking.

[angelina neves]

Adorable and very tender!!