OBSESSION

 

 

 

OBSESSION

 

 

When faces of flowers bloom out of the ground

  Proclaiming blissful spring stirring proud

   Babbling brook’s crystal clear streams

    Wash over crushed satin dreams ~

 

Breathing in colour of love’s rainbow hues

  Clean as early morning’s spangled dews

   Haunting echoes of sea sprays o’er my soul

    In healing spirits of my hearts firm resolve ~

 

I see mountains of splendour rise heave’n bound

  Where angels step from cerise feathered clouds

    Honeyed words flow from your feather quilled pen

     Your captured visions enthral senses to zen ~

 

As the world turns to face the day

  I say goodbye to night time's disarray

   And behold the ecstasy of your exquisite expression

    Which I confess has become my constant obsession ~

 

 

 

© Helena 2008

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading my words ! Helena :)

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

After I see all the glory around me..
Flowers bloom..blissful springs stirring
Was over crushed satin dreams..Quote
I see mountains of splendour rise heave'n bound
Where angels step from cerise feathered clouds
Honeyed words flow from your feather quilled pen
Your captured visions enthral senses to zen ~..QUOTE
And behold the ecstasy of your exquisite expression
Which I confess has become my constant obsession ~Quote
Obsession with his expressions..lucky guy
wonder who he is..ha ha
wonderful write

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Beautiful write. Loved it.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Absolutely beautiful... i love these lines especially...

"I see mountains of splendour rise heave'n bound

Where angels step from cerise feathered clouds"

gorgeous write... i can see your vision brilliantly.

Kalypso

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Helena,

A truly beautiful and inspired piece--a tripping melody of words for the mind's delight.

Very best regards,

Rick

[Desert Knave]

Excellent. Flows and rhymes wonderfully right through the perfection of that closing pair of lines "... And behold the ecstasy of your exquisite expression / Which I confess has become my constant obsession ...". The message of that final pair of lines struck me as divine. ~Jim

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Obsession can be a good thing for it shows passion when not taking to evil ways... very breathtaking and divine piece of writing.

[Mark D. Chevalier]

Obsession... I've always considered it a dangerous thing. Even as I get older I still can't say if it is constructive or destructive. But at least with your poem I can agree that as long as it is mutual, than you make it feel alrighty then...lol

Nice work!
Mark

[Michael]

I am very found of sunrises and any work that speaks to the change from night to day holds a special place with me. I really like how you incorporate varied themes like sea spray and mountains. Give it a well-rounded feel.

Great job!