WILL YOU DANCE WITH ME?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

WILL YOU DANCE WITH ME?

 

 

Will you dance with me in the moist midnight air...

Take my hand to the strains of violins... waltz without a care?

In our newly discovered fragrant rose garden of secret delights

Kissed by the moon’s bright shining light

Enchanted by the calling of a deep mystical midnight sound

A lifetime of waiting… you my love at last I’ve found

Looking deep into my eyes you embrace my waist so tight

On this magical carpet ride this moonlight night

When our dance is through my dear

Our hearts will be entwined together its clear

As we sit at the feet of Eros’ enthralling shrine

Our love will out dazzle the brightest star’s shine ~

 

 

 

 

 

© Helena 2008

Author's Note

Thank you for stopping by and reading my words! Helena

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh I can see two lovers dance amid large circle of dancers
they waltze to the music humming softly in the midnight air
so gently carried through the air ..as the two lovers
keep circling round and round its as if the whole place reserved for them
no one else in sight..it seems love is only in the air
they dance like in a fit going round here and there
almost feeling dizzy..fall into each others embrace
yes tonight is the night my love..keep circling me round and round
love is that magic in the air..dance me more
simply wonderful..

[Aspiring Angel]

I am a little late with my New Years Resolutiion to try to get myself to the computer for "Me" time more often. I have missed dropping in on friends here. As always Helena your work is enchantingly beautiful. I hope that your weekend has been good to you.

Hugs,
Lesa

[Victoria Chang]

In my mind this poem is like a flow-y dream.
This poem is also very touching
not to mention enchanting.
It's like a tale of forever.
That love is just like dancing.
Waltzing without a care....
Please continue writing ...

[Tammy]

Lovely write...

[poetic soul]

thank you for sharing these lovely words.. it was a pleasure reading yo words.. they are so emotionally embedded and beautiful.. :)

Regards,
Poetic Soul

[Fran Marie]

Enchanted by the calling of a deep mystical midnight sound

A lifetime of waiting� you my love at last I've found

Absolutely Beautiful such sweet romantic verse penned

Quite nicely~ Well DonE! indeed!~Fran Marie

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Helena,

This is a wonderful piece. You have a clear grasp of the feeling and mood of the dance. You make it come alive with emotion and the tempo of the words mimic the sweep of a waltz. Nicely penned.

Kindest regards,

Rick

[Kal]

simply a ROMANTIC POEM! very beautiful and very romantic...
very well described and full of amazing emotions...
well written!

[Lance]

Will you Dance with Me? flows smoothly along just like a wonderful dance. Lovely, L.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Wow! What a beautiful piece of writing,
Simply amazing...It is really very much romantic and full of warmness.

"As we sit at the feet of Eros' enthralling shrine
Our love will out dazzle the brightest star's shine " - what a beautiful imaginary and such a brilliant metaphor.

A very strong and powerful piece of writing it is....

It also reminded me of the first half of the story "The Nightingale and the Rose" by Oscar Wilde.

Great work, as always...

[Arthur Crow]

The care and precison that went into this gorgeous spill is obvious, such beautiful flow and deeply romantic. I think what you have expressed is like a sacred ambience of seduction. Enchanting!