GREY DREAMS

GREY DREAMS

A Poem by Helena

 

  

 

 

GREY DREAMS

 

 

You came to me in colourful dreams once...

I only have sad grey dreams now

Not the vibrant almost real ones ~

 

 

 

Like a gold ring on a merry go round

Just out of reach, I held on whilst

Tauntingly, like impish elves

They played with my mind ~

 

 

 

Soon they will not return at all

There will be no point

That gold ring will never be caught

You see you took it with you

With the promise of forever ~

 

 

 

 

A dreamless sleep is what awaits me...

When that night of nothingness arrives

Dreams will be lost into the void

Like bad friends I will bid them goodbye

As they won’t matter anymore ~

 

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© Helena 2008

© 2008 Helena


Author's Note

Helena
Thank you for reading my words !

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Oh! So beautiful but so sad�. And the gold on the rings of "promises of forever" are always a false one! It is a bright ring but the "forever's gold" just stays in it for each day it is really felt, then it melts away with the feelings � but then, as I see it, "forever" is just today!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The question of found and lost, love and languishment and promises made to be broken... excellent.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Helena
Helena

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Born at Sydney N.S.W. and lived there until moving near to the Gold Coast Qld. on Australia�s beautiful east coast. I have 3 sons, 3 grandsons and two grandaughters all who are the .. more..

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