SEPTEMBER MORN

 

 

 

 

SEPTEMBER MORN

 

 

You stepped out of my dreams

into my September morn

where dappled sunlight

kissed autumn leaves

 

loneliness swept

into nightly shadows

haunting symphonies

swaying in perfect time

to the dance of our love

 

Its strange how September morn

can still make me feel this way ~

 

 

 

(c) Helena 2008

 

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

God i loved every line ,i always like to say i liked this line,but i liked them all what pretty language,how soft and tender and you relate september to lots of things
these lines however i will never forget
Its strange how September morn
can still make me feel this way ~
just perfect ,the flow ,the emotions are so good,this is wonderful

[Periac]

awesome

[Helen Woodward]

Keeping the dream alive, that's how I see it, beautiful beyond mere words. I think you would feel this way in october as well? Well placed prose and great choice of words, making the content sublime :-)

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

A beautiful of love remembered. Thanks for sharing and revealing your heart

[Ocean Orchid]

You stepped out of my dreams
into my September morn
where dappled sunlight
kissed autumn leaves ---------- a wonderful poetic expression with well depiction of season ... liked this ..

[Wondering Mind]

Beautiful writing, a lovely photograph to go with it, and a wonderful colouring of the font to go with it all.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very pretty poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Säde Ryder]

You use such pretty language!
My favorite: where dappled sunlight/kissed autumn leaves
It is a lovely poem for a lovely season.