A DIFFERENT HUE

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A Different Hue

 

 

The stars far away with diamonds cold

gone  the warm hearth of a heart to thaw

our love story penned ne'er to unfold

the blight of the moon chills to the core

 

Heart empty, emotions worn

spirit broken with your uncaring ways

with all hope gone a soul tattered and torn

I know one day you will have to pay

 

The stars now seem to be a different hue

distant remote as your love was to me

the broken promises to remain true

you played your game, I lost you see

 

You left me in an lamentable plight

o' please tell me what gave you that right ~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(c) Helena 2008

Author's Note

thank you for reading my words

Reviews

[Ocean Orchid]

An true & awesome piece Poet .... keep on the flow of yr amazing pen...

The stars far away with diamonds cold
gone the warm hearth of a heart to thaw
our love story penned ne'er to unfold
the blight of the moon chills to the core
Heart empty, emotions worn
spirit broken with your uncaring ways
with all hope gone a soul tattered and torn
know one day you will have to pay

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

The poems of lost love and unfair treatment deguised as true love. Pain turns a heart cold vengful.

Heart empty, emotions worn

spirit broken with your uncaring ways

with all hope gone a soul tattered and torn

I know one day you will have to pay






A poem in its truest form. thanks for sharing.

[poddar kushal]

The coldness comes out of this poem only to warm the readers feelings for you. The language and the use of it is rhythmic to say the least.

[Suelou]

That is a good question. I have often wondered the same thing. They just seem to think that because we are their spouse, they can do whatever they want. We have to set them straight.