THE WHISPERERS

WRITTEN FOR "KEEPING THE DREAM ALIVE" ~ WITH TOVLI PHRASE: 'KISSES FROM THE MUSE YOU SERVE'

 

 

 

 

 

  

THE WHISPERERS

 

They, the weaver of daydreams

The gypsies of your enquiring mind

Leading you on paths to worlds unknown ~

 

They, the gentle whisperers

Sending thoughts to heavenly heights

The lights lit within you with eternal flames ~

 

They fly to the moon on angels wings

to gather the moon dust of ideas

Where seeds of creativity grow  ~

 

In fragrant rainbow gardens of peace

They dazzle eyes with glorious visions

Until emersed and swimming ~ 

 

 

In sea of beauty beyond a poet’s imagination

They are the eternal dreamers since time began

The mystics deep within your writer's soul ~

 

The unwritten words within you awakened by their caresses

They are the kisses from the muse you serve ~

 

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Reviews

[Lily1111]

"They, the weaver of daydreams
The gypsies of your enquiring mind
Leading you on paths to worlds unknown ~"

Beautiful opening lines, exquisitely descriptive that set the tone for the balance of this wonderful poem. Of all the lovely lines, my favorite is the closing lines:

"The unwritten words within you awakened by their caresses
They are the kisses from the muse you serve ~"

Wonderfully written and truly enjoyed.

[Bear]

MMMMmmmmm what a beauty of a scene to think of as I ZZZzzzzzzzzz drift off to sleep.
Fine words, beautiful dream.
Sallie Bear

[God's Little Whispers B..]

OH HELENA THIS IS JUST AWESOMELY BEAUTIFUL. OF COURSE, SINCE I HAVE SUCH A CONNECTION
WITH THE WORD 'WHISPER'....THIS REALLY AND TRULY TOUCHED MY HEART AND SOUL. THANK YOU
SO VERY MUCH FOR SHARING THIS WITH ME.

LOVE YOU AND MISS YOU. STILL HOPING TO START SHARING SOON. HEALTH ISSUES HAVE SLOWED
ME DOWN SO MUCH....BUT I DON'T WANT TO GIVE UP. TAKE CARE MY DEAR.

WITH MY LOVE, MARY ANNE ^J^ God's Little Whispers

[angelina neves]

a very gentel and beautiful painting made with lovely words!

[Tony Hwilka]

It's eleance captures one's soul and heart. Tony

[imm's place]

wow exquisite celestial pen my friend, mary

[Nassira]

This is so beautiful. Your poem is full of colors and light, the whispers gives it a mystic note and enables the readers mind to dream in your amazing world of gentleness and imagination. Well done Helena :) I loved the read :)
Salam to you :)

[Deborah Shepard]

so very beautiful ...

[Gabrielle]

Beautiful~

[T]

I also LOVED this ....the reference to "kisses from the muse you serve" ah so well expressed!!!

[NightDream]

I LOVE IT. very visual and light. It flows smoothly with a rythem similur to a whimsical lullaby. I found it masterfully written with the ability to capture the reader and draw them through a world of imagination.
Great Work this is going in my library under favorites!!