IN DREAMS

 

 

 

 

IN DREAMS

 

 

In dreams I walk hand in hand with my love

In rose hewn pathways ‘neath bowers of doves

I know what I dream for….. you also feel

In dreams I know for certain you’re real  

 

I see our love’s dream reflected in lotus filled ponds

Daisy rings plucked by your hand form our strong bonds

Promises made in precious moments do come true

Under sparkling pristine stars of bright blue 

 

I feel like a princess in her golden coach

Your knightly manner is beyond reproach

As the clock strikes midnight we’re free to pretend

With fairy tales and make believe we transcend 

 

Our nightly trysts gather moments divine

Leaving all the qualms of daylight behind

Its only in dreams that I dread the new morn

with the coming of dawn you will be gone 

 

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 (c) Helena 2008

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[WordMaster]

I know the message being sent, but it's lost a bit amount the images that seem to me too blurred.

Dreaming of love is something we can all relate to � But "rose hewn pathways 'neath bowers of doves" and "lotus filled ponds Daisy rings plucked by your hand form our strong bonds" may have some readers wondering where you are - maybe?

Sometime "we" poets forget that simple is sometimes best.

Nevertheless, I loved these � "Promises made in precious moments do come true. Under sparking pristine stars of bright blue." and "It's only in dreams that I dread the new morn with the coming of dawn you will be gone."


Good luck

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A very eloquent write with wonderful imagery. Good luck with the contest