MYSTICAL DREAMER

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I am ~

 

 

The weaver of your nightly dreams

the gypsy in your wandering soul

longing for paths to worlds unknown ~

 

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The gentle breeze beneath your thoughts

floating to heavenly heights, spiritual truth

 the life within your breath ~

 

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Only in dreams I am the gatherer

of rainbows in baskets of love

with moonbeam dreams and magic spells

sewn in fragrant sachets for your pillow ~

 

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Flying you nightly to the marshmallow moon

on vanilla gossamer wings

to blend the rainbow dust of ideas

where seeds of creativity grow ~

 

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Drying your tears with my glorious visions

pure an untouched

until you and I am emersed as one in healing

green sea of nature's beauty~

 

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A dreamer’s dream within your hoping heart

the diviner and keeper of all the dreamscapes

Of your seeking soul ~

 

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(c) Helena 2008

 

 

 

 

 

 

Written for Keeping the Dream Alive Contest

Angelinmypocket (Liz's) Phrase:

  "Only in Dreams"

 

 

Reviews

[Nassira]

I just love how you make your words fuse with one another and all these pictures and colors that comes to mind when I read your poetry. Your talent is amazing Helena! Your imagination is also unbelievably inspiring!
That is a very nice one for the contest. Thank you for sharing.
Salam :)

Nassira

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Helena,

A very nice poem. I absolutely love the opening line: "The weaver of your nightly dreams". Very powerful.

Nice work!

Best regards,

Rick

[Tovli]

ewww! i love this. awesome imagery--it even had a silent melody! lovely. tovli

[Constance L. Hartwell]

this is a beautiful poem. with your words, you took me to another world. you used desciptive language to paint a wonderful picture in my head. good job.

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Really a beauty of a poem, Helena! I know she's going to weave some magical dreams for us all tonight. :-) Sharon

[Gandré]

oh, I hope you win the contest. This was beautiful. We naturally think of dreams as experiences very like perceptions or imaginings, except that they occur during sleep, in Freudian psychoanalysis dreams have been considered to give access to some of the hidden operations of the mind, Dreaming is puzzling in many respects. We do not have ready-to-hand criteria for checking dream reports, not even our own; conscious or lucid dreams are the exception rather than the rule and there is the puzzle of how we distinguish waking experience from a very lifelike dream. Furthermore, the nature of dreams is doubtful - some have even denied that to dream is to undergo an experience during sleep: dreams on this view are to be understood in terms of what happens when we ’recall’ them. And so, you explained all this poetically. Oh, I hope you win the contest. This was just beautiful.

[Bear]

oh to have a baritone or bass vocal, reciting your words lulling me to sleep. ;~)
Fabulous Write!!
Thank you for sharing!!
Sallie Bear

[Michael X]

Only in dreams, Helena, I think the way you connect with your soul ambitions is beautifully innvented in such a way it takes the reader to another place and time, leaves the heart pondering the meaning

of magic- its enchanting effects set to drift- as well as the loving- lulling embrace the imagery presents itself with- in many ways setting thoughts adrift, pillowy details whisper. the spellbound environment

connects to the metaphorical analysis with charming attribute. the moonlit intentions shadow the
reader with a sense of wonder, to ponder a weaver of dreams. stunning, uplifting encouraging sparkles
Take Care.

[DRIVEN]

Beautiful, filled with wonderful imagery. Good luck with the contest!!!

[Orlando Murcia]

Absolutely Amazing! I love the way you wrote this beautiful piece Helena Great work. Orlando

[Morning Song]

"I am ~


The weaver of your nightly dreams

the gypsy in your wandering soul

longing for paths to worlds unknown ~

Can I just copy Nassira's comment and paste it here? she said every thing that I wanted to say, but so much more eloquently than I ever could have. Helena, your talent IS amazing, and it's such a privilege to still be able to read your words. You ARE a dream weaver. And we are the ones who are the benificiaries of your words. I'm standing on my table again, and I'm clapping and clapping.

Great big hugs...
Jeri