DAWNS CALL

 

  

 

 

DREAMING WHEN DAWN’S

LEFT HAND WAS IN THE SKY 

 

WAVING HELLO TO THE SUN

SAYING GOODBYE TO THE MOON

 

A NEW DAY WITH FRESH THOUGHTS

RUMINATE ON PEN’S TIP

 

MUSE PLAYS HIDE AND SEEK WITH

SUNBEAMS ACROSS THE DESK

 

SCATTERED PAPERS COVERS DUST

WHILE I YAWN AT DAWN’S EARLY CALL

 

~~~

 

Helena 

 

 Written for Follow The Dream Contest

 

"Dreaming when dawn's left hand was in the sky"

Inspired by the writings of Omar Khayyam (from Rubiayat) the phrase:

 

 

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Well written piece.

[Helena]

THANK YOU FOR READING MY WORDS! ~ Helena

[TwilightOknight]

dancning beauty mom~ every poem has a different colour to unfold.

[darkgurl]

"MUSE PLAYS HIDE AND SEEK WITH SUNBEAMS ACROSS THE DESK" Love this line right here, this is a most wonderful write here, I enjoyed this.

[angelina neves]

wonderful! "A NEW DAY WITH FRESH THOUGHTS/RUMINATE ON PEN'S TIP// MUSE PLAYS HIDE AND SEEK WITH
/SUNBEAMS ACROSS THE DESK"! ~ very beautiful!

[Tovli]

a great use of the phrase. the imagery was well done, i thought. enjoyed. tovli

[Suelou]

Wow! This is very well written. You did it good.

[Deborah Shepard]

wounderful beauty

[angelinmypocket]

A vision of the reality that all poets share. All commonplace ventures forgotten in the quest for creating.
Our poetry creates the world we live in and the world we live in creates our poetry.
Simply lovely Helena.
Love...Liz

[huma]

thank you for dreaming this