For the boy I hope for...

For the boy I hope for...

A Poem by heido
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"I don't want to be a slave to your pain."

"

Last night was lovely wasn't it dear?

You allowed me entrance

Let me embrace you

Relax into me dear one

Tell of your day and what it contained

Interrupt me with yours love

Tell me of what hurts and what heals

Tell me what it is you need

 

--- yes you slept and I was calm

-You were a riot and I was a peace

Dear love I am

 

Valentine's day..

Sigh, siplicity was key

Ice creams and movies

Massages and small talk

I am right here dear one

I am love dear one

 

 

© 2011 heido


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Posted 10 Years Ago


Dear heido,

Very nice. Very simple. Very honest. These sort of things can really make a poem. Such things connect with the reader. So, this was very nicely done.

Very best regards and high marks,

Rick


Posted 13 Years Ago


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Posted 13 Years Ago


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I hope I feel the same way when I'm in love

Posted 13 Years Ago


what a beautiful poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very sweet and loving all the way through. I like the way you format the text too. Moving that little concluding stanza to the middle makes it a lovely finish to a lovely poem.

I really like this side of you heido. !

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was gorgeous dear friend, I like this side of your's, it becomes you.

Antonio xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


This made me feel very peaceful for some reason, very relaxed. You expressed love and the joy of feeling comfortable with the person you love very well. Nicely done! (simplicity is misspelled in the final stanza)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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