Lips Locked

Lips Locked

A Poem by heido
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I have never met a man who could keep a promise

Or a lover who could hold his tongue

© 2010 heido


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heido
Can't add more. Just seems to some up the feelings of the days.

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I feel I should clarify.

I meant that the promises that have been made to me seem to become shackles and I would rather they just remain in the head of the man, if you can not commit to a promise simply do not make it. A lover who can not hold his tongue when making grandios statements of eternal love and devotion is not necessarily a liar, but more often that not comes up short. I'd rather just be in love for the moment without having to contimplate this fallacy.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Well, I do keep my promises, but I've only made like 2 in my life, nothing as foolish as "I'll never cheat on you" - I have integrity, afterall...

A lover who can't hold his tongue

that might not be a bad thing for a woman, physically at least lol though psychically, perhaps a bit more damaging...there's nothing more dangerous than a man deluded that he's in love.

Men should just shut the f**k up, unless they mean what they say. This is what Jesus meant when he said, "Verily, I say unto you, that that which comes out of your mouth is more important than what goes in" or as Buddha says, "treat your words like gems"

Posted 15 Years Ago


There are a few but not many
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Posted 15 Years Ago



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