the night before the world ended

the night before the world ended

i asked who you would have chosen

if it hadn't been for you pride

or your fear that i would leave you

if it wasnt for your friend

and your need for their approval

if it hadnt been for her

the other woman in your life

if you were not concearned with how she felt

too innocent to break her heart

 

the night before the world ends

i will ask you who you wished you had of chosen

 

 

Reviews

[Jessie]

It seemed to have alot of feeling behind it. It seemed like you were really wired up (guessing from the very few spelling errors) and I like that. Poems that are written in bursts of feelings are always awesome. Good job!

[SoullessPrincess]

this is very good. Thge poem speaks for its self

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Not a question which I'd be comfortable in answering on a night such as that but, the message in the poem is clearly conveyed. Thank you for sharing