visions of a ghost

A flower begins to blossom blowing a sweet fragrance bees pollinating honey the wind chimes. Are chiming beautiful rhythms and melodies, love is so unclear as time never stands still. The sky starts to fill with darken clouds starts to storm out so fast have a chance to dance in the rain make to make wild passionate kisses that last forever making love in the rain while listening to a song on the radio god gave me you by Blake Shelton, we sat down on our front porch holding hands and rocking back and fourth so in love was all that we needed he touches my face. He touches mt heart, sitting ,swinging on our porch just like it was yesterday. I opened up my eyes as I lay upon my husbands grave.

Reviews

[Mirra]

A smile was drawn on my face as I read through the lines but these lines took the smile away . . .

"I opened up my eyes as I lay upon my husbands grave."

Then I scrolled back up and read the title again. For a moment I forgot that this poem was about a decease loved one, you are amazing. Like this a lot!

[melissa]

This is amazing poem keep up the great work and keep them coming

[Konigin]

WOW Star. This was one is dark and powerful. Beautiful. Raw. It drew me in and never let me go.

Amazing job! :D

[star73]

thank you for the kind compliments.

[Konigin]

You are most welcome. :)

[Saddam]

Genuine and sadly impressive. Great craft dear.

[star73]

thank you very much.

[BlackRose]

WOW, beautiful but sad at the end. Great piece. @{/:o)

[star73]

thank you sorry i didn't say thank you a month ago i didn't know how to leave comments then.

[BlackRose]

No don't be sorry, we all had to learn and know how and what the protocols are around here. It took me a short while too on navigating and all on here. As they say, we learn something new everyday. :o)

[Emily B]

this is gorgeous, beautiful

[Tina Louise UK]

So very touching...beautiful piece :) x

[star73]

thank you i didn't see the comments or reviews.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing...:)............

[star73]

thank you for the review i didn't know to post back lol.