Are You Still Falling?

I once opened a door,

and you were hidden behind it,

Trying so hard to heal before

I would see the brokenness.

 

You were far, far too late

And I thought that was okay.

 

You had eyes like an angel,

And a will to try and fly.

My own heart was mangled,

But you knew how to make it right.

 

I thought you were too late,

and I was ready to break.

 

You were healing so fast

And I knew that I could leave,

so I sighed and left the past,

But you didn’t give up on me.

 

I wanted to waste away,

but you always stayed awake.

 

You’ve been my legend my whole life,

And you made my wings brand-new.

So I got a chance to fly,

And its always been all thanks to you.

Author's Note

This one is for laughinglullaby.

Reviews

[cfix]

I really adored this write, the deepness and emotional content. I thought the layout of this write was wonderful. Very nicely written.

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

As you well know I tend to write dark poetry but believe it or not I am a true romantic and this poem just to me spoke of true love that we can just forget the past start anew with someone who truly makes us happy very well done a great write as always :)

100/100

[laughinglullaby]

lheehee... this is cute i like it a lot :)

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

Very nice (: made me smile! Thanks for sharing that with me

[Coyote Poetry]

A very positive poem of love. When we love someone we will stand with them in the good or bad days. I like the complete poem. A very good ending to a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote