I Miss My Stalker!!!!!!!!

Its been almost three years since you were there, and I still remember.

I can't think of you,

not the way you think of me,

and everything you do

stops my calmed heart beat.

Honey, can you feel the heat?

Thats just blood, running from the wrists

you want to slit.

Shut up. There is nothing but this.

There is a whole world after this,

if I can bear to walk away,

and crush your smiling face,

but darling, I don't owe you anything.

you held a broken heart in your hands,

but little by little I stole it back.

Do you miss me?

Too bad. I don't care.

No order can restrain you,

I still feel your fingers under my hair.

Your hands were warm around my neck,

but your strangle hold wasn't worth it.

And.... if you're wondering, I'm not coming back.

Don't you dare to miss me, my final heart attack.

Reviews

[TBPopper]

Wow, this is actually pretty good. No disrespect, of course, you just look sort of young so I came in with the attitude of 'Eh, we'll see...'

Excellent title, really drew me right to this one as I'm browsing your work. I liked it a lot. The emotion's just right. Really sells 'crazy person' straight away.

Oh, and good for you for flat out praising Jesus in your profile. Always glad to see that.

[Brandon]

This was amazing, i really love it. Great work, keep it up. =)



100/100

[KatiePie]

Oh the passion is incredible! I love it.

[I've Killed Lions]

I like the brutality in your words, the honesty in it is amazing. Great job

[munkiC munkiDU]

I like the confident, kick-a*s attitude in this. Very emotionally driven. Well done!
^_^

[laughinglullaby]

i like it.... i love the burtual honesty. it works well for you