I Miss My Stalker!!!!!!!!

Its been almost three years since you were there, and I still remember.

I can't think of you,

not the way you think of me,

and everything you do

stops my calmed heart beat.

Honey, can you feel the heat?

Thats just blood, running from the wrists

you want to slit.

Shut up. There is nothing but this.

There is a whole world after this,

if I can bear to walk away,

and crush your smiling face,

but darling, I don't owe you anything.

you held a broken heart in your hands,

but little by little I stole it back.

Do you miss me?

Too bad. I don't care.

No order can restrain you,

I still feel your fingers under my hair.

Your hands were warm around my neck,

but your strangle hold wasn't worth it.

And.... if you're wondering, I'm not coming back.

Don't you dare to miss me, my final heart attack.

Reviews

[TBPopper]

Wow, this is actually pretty good. No disrespect, of course, you just look sort of young so I came in with the attitude of 'Eh, we'll see...'

Excellent title, really drew me right to this one as I'm browsing your work. I liked it a lot. The emotion's just right. Really sells 'crazy person' straight away.

Oh, and good for you for flat out praising Jesus in your profile. Always glad to see that.

[Larrycall]

dark and mysterious yet calming and soft clever write

[SOUL LESS]

Like I always say; "You can't love someone just because they'd die without you." Yeah..a nice poem, well expressed because it isn't much of a topic and u did a good job with it. :) Though it doesn't sound like you miss him..lol

[Rose]

It's slightly strange, but I love it. Although, I feel like the word choice would be better if you didn't rhyme the ends of the lines.

[ObsidianSea]

Very well written, it flows great.

[PossiblyAlice]

whoa...very interesting!

[KAREN]

I think you did an excellent job, It is well written and keeps you reading till the end!!

[Dancing Queen♥]

very nice poem :} i liked it..

[Bridget Mcmaken]

wow amazing poem! I love the flow of it and it had me in tears. So dark but yet calm and soft. Very wonderful write. I love this poem just amazing work done here!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

outstanding job on this... wonderful concept!

[Gone.]

Wow!! I am crying