Ah, HG,
What a lovely French Qautern!
There is nothing more inspiring than wiping the slate clean and starting all over … well, for most of us it's a lovely dream, but we all need our dreams, eh?
Nice rhymes, too, and a good flow. A few lines out of count, but are easy fixes.
For best presentation, consider centering and trying a nicer font … perhaps, with color and in italics.
Just sharing teacher thoughts. : )
I've very much enjoyed this one, Mary Jo … thank you for the new year treat! ⁓ Richard 😊
Don't you love how the site takes dashes and turns them into quotation marks(I?) … LOL!
Try using a series of hyphens, thusly:
"""-~**~-"""
-----------~**~----------
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you so much for the visit & kind words in review of this inspiring piece. Though my words ar.. read moreThank you so much for the visit & kind words in review of this inspiring piece. Though my words are positive ones they are totally opposite of the way the reality of life can sometimes be ~ “much easier said than done”.
I appreciate the suggestions you’ve given me but I do much of my posting/reading/commenting from my phone which limits the presentation options necessary to improve the visual of the posted piece ~ but I’ll make the suggested edits when I get back to my laptop.
Thanks again for sharing your valuable time to review and comment on this one my dear friend. 🌹
Ah, HG,
What a lovely French Qautern!
There is nothing more inspiring than wiping the slate clean and starting all over … well, for most of us it's a lovely dream, but we all need our dreams, eh?
Nice rhymes, too, and a good flow. A few lines out of count, but are easy fixes.
For best presentation, consider centering and trying a nicer font … perhaps, with color and in italics.
Just sharing teacher thoughts. : )
I've very much enjoyed this one, Mary Jo … thank you for the new year treat! ⁓ Richard 😊
Don't you love how the site takes dashes and turns them into quotation marks(I?) … LOL!
Try using a series of hyphens, thusly:
"""-~**~-"""
-----------~**~----------
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you so much for the visit & kind words in review of this inspiring piece. Though my words ar.. read moreThank you so much for the visit & kind words in review of this inspiring piece. Though my words are positive ones they are totally opposite of the way the reality of life can sometimes be ~ “much easier said than done”.
I appreciate the suggestions you’ve given me but I do much of my posting/reading/commenting from my phone which limits the presentation options necessary to improve the visual of the posted piece ~ but I’ll make the suggested edits when I get back to my laptop.
Thanks again for sharing your valuable time to review and comment on this one my dear friend. 🌹
This poem was like taking a deep meditative breath, and I needed that. Nicely worded, and it reminded me to cleanse my heart and mind positively, so thank you so much for writing this.
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you for the kind understanding words left in review of this piece. Tis true, but sometimes h.. read moreThank you for the kind understanding words left in review of this piece. Tis true, but sometimes hard to do. I appreciated the visit very much.
clear your heart,clear your mind,leave evil behind,,great message
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6 Years Ago
Yes, it is a great message ... but easier said than done! Thanks for the visit & kind words left i.. read moreYes, it is a great message ... but easier said than done! Thanks for the visit & kind words left in review WM.
Thank you for taking the time to review this little piece filled with hope & positive thoughts on a .. read moreThank you for taking the time to review this little piece filled with hope & positive thoughts on a bright & great New Year for all! I truly do appreciate the kind words & visit.
Wishing you a year filled with much Health, Wealth & Happiness.
I hopeful positive message written as a beautiful portrait. Thank you for sharing part of your heart with us
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6 Years Ago
Thank you so much for the kind words & understanding of this piece KC. I truly do pray that 2018 .. read moreThank you so much for the kind words & understanding of this piece KC. I truly do pray that 2018 will be a better year for all of us my friend.
same to you Ms. Heaven ... uplifting to read ..positive thoughts to carry into each day ..thanks for sharing
E.
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6 Years Ago
Thank You so much for the kind understanding words in review EN ~ wishing you all the best 2018 my f.. read moreThank You so much for the kind understanding words in review EN ~ wishing you all the best 2018 my friend.