Haiku Suite

sunshine filters in

robins share their happy songs

greatness all around

sunshine warms the earth

mourning doves meandering

squirrels run about

raindrops fall to earth

flora proudly standing tall

nature is renewed

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

A lovely haiku string my friend, just one little point if i may ...the alliteration between "mourning" and "meandering" is wonderful but using "ing" twice in such a small line is not very good in any kind of form.Maybe "mourning doves meander free" ? ,just a suggestion:)

[heavenscentgirl1]

Thanks for taking time to review this one Stella ~ I truly do appreciate it my friend.


Take care ~ blessings, 🙏
~ mj

[KAREN]

A poem full of wonderful imagery that lets the reader see the true beauty as they read!

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What a beautiful haiku with wonderful imagery you shared! I love nature but can't write as beautifully as you or others write here.Very pleasing to read...

[heavenscentgirl1]

THANK YOU SO MUCH SIMA , I APPRECIATE THE KIND WORDS IN REVIEW. HSG 😇

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I really enjoyed these well-done Haikus....

the one form I enjoy writing myself.
thank you for these,
j.

[heavenscentgirl1]

THANK YOU JACOB, YOUR REVIEW IS VERY MUCH APPRECIATED. HSG 😇

[PlayWrite]

real simple, yet sweet enough to read over

[heavenscentgirl1]

Thank you for taking the time to read and leave such kind comments, they are very much appreciated . MHSG😇

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Mary Jo... pleasant birds and special flowers are part of our heritage.., a group of Haiku lifts me up and away to a gorgeous day.
truly, Pat

[heavenscentgirl1]

Pat, Thanks for taking the time to read and leave your kind words on this piece. I truly appreciate it. 🌹🌻MJ

[Laurierose]

I ADORE haikus. Very simple. Very lovely. Great read.

[heavenscentgirl1]

Thank You Laurie Rose ~ I’m glad that you enjoyed this older piece that I had posted. I’m sorry for the late response. 🌹

[Kelly Scheppers]

I must admit I am quite fond of the haiku and senryu form. I've never presented multiple verses though. Love the nature appeal to this.

Welcome to the WC!

[heavenscentgirl1]

Kelly, thanks so much for the visit & kind words in review of this little Haiku Suite. Writing about nature has a way of calming one’s soul & bringing forth a peacefulness to Life.

Take care & enjoy your day ~ blessings,
~ hsg

[Chris]

Well spoken and reasoned Haiku...

[heavenscentgirl1]

Thanks for reviewing another of my postings Chris ~ it is very much appreciated.

Blessings, 🙏
~ hsg

[Gee]

A celebration of nature in your three well penned Haikus ( Haiku ??)

[heavenscentgirl1]

Thank you Gee for the kind words in review of this posting ~ they are very much appreciated.
read moreThank you Gee for the kind words in review of this posting ~ they are very much appreciated.

Blessings,
~ hsg

[Relic]

I've always liked nature poems so this was easy to read and like. The images are clear.

Nice job on this. :)

[heavenscentgirl1]

Relic, thank you for reading another of my limited offerings here on WC ~ it is very much appreciated. I hope to be posting something new soon.

Blessings, 🙏
~ hsg