THROUGH OUT THE AGES

cinquain series form time goes by so quickly

 The

 ages blow

 away past winds

 dreams die like falling

 stars.

 I

 am ever

 catching your name

 in the winds of

 time.

 Your

 name refreshes

 my heart beat

 longing to have you

 near.

 You

 are like

 a misty day

 resting softly in my

 arms.

 Your

 lovely aura

 black raven hair

 lies gently upon my

 chest.

 The

 winds weep

 whispering your name

 lingers now  throughout the 

 ages.

Reviews

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

A poignant an flowing write, thoroughly enjoyed. Welcome to WC!

[Rita L. Sev]

I hear a sigh in these words - a beautiful series. The alliteration in the last cinquain works very well.