Blind

Blind

A Poem by ♥(heatherawesome)♥

I was all alone.

I was never blinded by the sun.

Until I met you.

You put me through the pain.

The blind you have put me through.

I never see why you were so cruel.

I met you and I became blind.

Not blinded by the sun.

But it is by your love.

You tried to kill me.

You never susceeded.

I was blind when I met you.

 

When the love was through.

I was beginning to be free.

I am seeing the sun.

I am not as blind.

I am free from your love.

Blind will never find me again.

I am stronger than you.

I am seeing the light and, Not as blind.

When I was with you.

I can see the sun.

But I will never see you.

I will never be blind by your love again.

So never please try to blind me.

Not ever again.

 

© 2010 ♥(heatherawesome)♥


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i loved it another awesome peice great job i loved it

Posted 13 Years Ago


very repetative, which throws off the entire balance of things when not used properly, otherwise it is a good start. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Canton , OH



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My name is Heather Schultz. I love to read and write poems. I am 14yrs old. My Bff (aka sister) is Katlynn Feller. I have a younger sister named Courtney. I alos have a younger brother named Charles. .. more..

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