Darkness

I was in the darkness.

I was in the cold.

Nothing really healed this,

Lonley hole in my sole.

You reached out your arms to me.

Held out your life to me and you.

You you pelled me out,

Of the darkness.

Now I am in light.

Out of the cold.

 Into your arms.

Now I am healed.

I am out of the,

The Darknesssssssssss.

 

Author's Note

this is for a group

Reviews

[Cynthia]

I love this, a very nice flow and its great! I love how you describe the pain you felt, so relatable. Its short, simple but its really clear about the topic and its great! Just some spelling error that can be easily fixed, other than that, its wonderful!
Nice written!

[Carolina Kel]

I like what you were shooting for here, despite the spelling errors. :)

[Ruth]

Lovely how you go forth into the light in this piece hon!
Beautifully done!
xx

[♥(heatherawesome..]

thank u alllllllllllllllllllllll

[chaotic katie]

soul and pulled are spelled wrong but other than that i loved it great job i am glad to see people posting on my forum

[The Analog Kid]

Good stuff...just a few typos. A guy would love to hear these words:)