Saved By You

I have been saved by you.

Many times ago.

Now I don't have any more sorrow to go away.

Now I have been saved by you.

And you have changed me.

From being saved by you.

Now you have gave me faith to move on.

I been saved by you.

Now you have turned against me.

when you tried to start a fight.

After being saved by you.

I am so different in a good way.

When I am saved by you____.

 

 

Author's Note

this might be short and also i have done this one really quickly

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the short poem. It is strong and I like the message in the poem. To know you are always safe leave a life with many good options that are possible. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Iota]

an event starts to unfold here like you were about to go deeper into this piece. For quick and dirty it meets the purpose but maybe go back over it and expand to it. Other wise a good write.

[Liza]

it left me wondering - what were you saved from or was this person there at the right time...and just helped you save yourself...
you made me think; wonder and left a sense of mystery
intriguing write.

[Mauricio Montoya]

not bad for quick and short may need a little fine tuning otherwise.
Nice work.