so help me now

So help me now I don't know what to do.

I guess you are so mad at me.

But I don't understand anything.

So help me what are you doing now.

So get out now I hate you .

You have lost me thousands of thimes ago.

So help me now.

What am I going to do to get,

Through to you Ooooh.

And now looking in your eyes.

I am felling my heart.

That you are lying to me.

So help me now.

I am through with you.

So help me now.

You have made me mad everytime,

I am there with you.

You have cheated on me many times.

Behind my back.

SO HELP ME NOW.

THAT YOU HAVE GONE CRAZY.

SO HELP ME NOW.

Reviews

[chaotic katie]

i loved this its a very emotional peice and its easy to relate to, some people can let you down but always remember that there is always somone left to get you right back on your feet again, this was a great peice.

[Jenny Nelson]

You do a good job with getting your thoughts out descriptively. Life, good or bad, gives us lots of inspiration. For being so young, you're off to a really good start. Well done.

[Iris Jayne]

this is like you wanna leave him but you kinda can't. i can TOTALLY relate. you're talented. and i like your name, heather right? (: this poem rocks. i like it. keep writing, im rating it high.

[♥(heatherawesome..]

thankz a lot i mean thankz you alllllll

[Coyote Poetry]

Some of the lines in this poem are the answers. Someone who can't be trusted need to be left behind and you need to find a good person with a honest heart. I like this poem. Strong and to the point. Sometime we need to help ourselves and run like hell in the other direction. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[zappy]

wow wonderful poem