Get Out

I never knew

the truth at all.

All you ever did

 was told me lies.

I will never

believe you again.

I will never

trust you again.

You have made me lost.

A thousand times.

So get out right now.

It's the end of you and me.

Get out right now the

truth is now told by you.

You have put me in

pain and also in vain.

You have told

me many lies.

I should know you

are no good for me.

Oooh yea.

You have changed

 your mind.

Like a girl has

changed her clothes.

I should know you

 are no good for me.

Especially when

 you cheat on me.

 

Reviews

[chaotic katie]

i love this heather its awesome and easy to relate to, i loved it

[Abigail Foster DeVuyst]

I like the 'strong woman' feel this has. She has had enough, and refuses to be in this situation anymore.

Maybe try splitting up your sentences to draw readers in even more.

Example:

I never knew
the truth at all.
All you ever did was
tell me lies.
I will never believe
you again.
I will never
trust you again.

This is just a suggestion, and the poem is nice as is, but just think about it!

[♥(heatherawesome..]

thankz

[chaffy]

I read this poem 3 times.. the whole thing, the orange letters and then the purple. i thought it was a good write. it is cool!

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Nice Little Rhyme here. Love can be very hurtful at times other times it can be sweet like Heaven if you have the right one treats you with respect and is Honest. Nice work

[Denise Deas]

Nice and Heartfelt.