Never Let You Go

I love you and its true

We will be together.

Nothing can break us up.

I am so happy that I am with you.

Love is there to the end.

Now love bireds have ran away.

They are not returning.

One was on the way.

We will be there together forever.

There is another on the way.

When the other was born,

The mother died in sorry and in pain.

The father left us to join the war.

The father has died in the war.

Left us alone in the world.

Now child don't cry.

no matter what has happened to you.

The girl was shot and then she died.

The whole family is now in heaven.

 

The devil tried to sepetate them.

Then GOD came and they are together forever.

 And they are not ever going to leave.

They will never let goooo.

 

 

Reviews

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

The Devil trys to Pull us down and steal our souls from Jesus but he always fails the task. beautiful write sad but a happy ending. nice work god bless

[Donna M. Burr]

I really liked this poem. I can feel the emotion in every line, and I can paint a nice story when I am reading this. There is only one spelling mistake, but that can easily be overlooked due to the quality of the poem. I love it.

[♥(heatherawesome..]

thankz

[Romeion Case]

Real. very real. :-)

[MiidniightSoul]

A very nice poem. It's very emotional and touching. I really enjoyed it :)

[chaotic katie]

heather this is a good poem with lots of emotion but it seems that you can relate to it a little too well, is somthing wrong