hot and so cold

You have changed your mind,

Many times,

Now I have to deal with all of the,

Pain you have put me through.

 

Now you are Hot and,

Now you are so cold.

I should know cause you have,

Cheated on me yea yea.

 

So now are you going to

Call a doctor on me.

Yea oooh.

So so what I am,

Still a rock and a loving star.

 

Now you are hot and,

Now you are so cold,

I should know cause you have,

Cheated on me yea yea

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. It flowed like good music. We can sense when things are not right. Being hot and cold leave us confused and hoping for more. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[chaotic katie]

love this heather yea yea i feel the energy awesome write heather

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

yea. yea, i like this kind of like a song Heather.. love the colors and the point is well said... good one~

Chloe