sunsets

I know that it may seem so hard,

To move on every day.

I tried to hard and I ended here___.

OOOOOOOhh.

 

Now I have seen your pain and I have seen,

Your face.

I have pulled you from the edge,

But no you pulled me there.

OOOOOOhh.

 

I have looked at the sunsetmany,

Times But I was crying,

From the pain.

 

Now I cry evertime I see,

A sunset and now I have seen your pain.

 

Reviews

[Star Wolf]

The sunset reminding you so pain and every time you see a sunset for a long time. The pain and sadness comes through strongly as well as the sympathy. Excellent poem, you did a great job.

[Wicahpi]

pain and sympathy rolled into one.
we will all experience our 'sunset'.

[chaotic katie]

this is sooo awesome heather i love the emotion you put into it

[deeps]

This is a very well written write
This could also be lyrics. I like this.
It's full of emotion.