Because of you???:):):):(:(

Because of you???:):):):(:(

A Poem by ♥(heatherawesome)♥
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hi

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This is verse #1

 

I am so afraidto do this,

But I have todo it,

It is so over between us toooo. (Jack)

Look I know why you,

Are so upset. (By me)

And I am so wondering Why.

(WHY DID YOU CHEAT ON ME)

 

This is the Chorous

 

Cause I liked th View.

When we were together. (not)

I really Herd you cry.

And I have seen you die.

And I have seen you cut yourself.

Because of you I am so Afraid

Because of you I am so afraid.

 

 

This is verse # 2

 

When you hit me,

You had me in pain.

Because of you.(Jack)

I am soooo afraid to walk.

To far from th side walk.

Because of you.

I am afraid.

Because of you.

I am afraid.

 

This is the Chorous

 

Cause I liked the view.

When we were together.(not)

I really herd you cry.

And I have seen you die.

And I have seen you cut yourself.

Because of you I am afraid.

Because of you I am afraid.

 

Verse #3

 

I have must of guest that you,

Love someone elso but not me.(Jack)

You can't understand one bit of,

My pain Ooooh.

And now its over and I am glad.

Because Iliked the View and also because of you.

 

This is the Chorous

 

Cause I likes the View.

When we were together. (not)

I really herd you cry.

And I have seen you die.

And I have seen you cut yourself.

Because of you I am afraid.

Because of you I am afraid

 

 

 

© 2010 ♥(heatherawesome)♥


Author's Note

♥(heatherawesome)♥
WHAT EVER IS IN (PARENTHERIS) IS TALKING AND THIS IS 4 jACK

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a few little minor corrections and this will be just fine.

(herd) should be heard and the third verse-first sentence
should read as (I must have guessed) or (I should have guessed)

keep working at it. I like your chorus very much.

Posted 14 Years Ago


thankz

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this and the set up of it.
Very well written and teh feelings are expressed well

Posted 14 Years Ago


thankz and i am so mad at ally

Posted 14 Years Ago


kool it kinda reminds me of that song because of you by kelly clarkson
mixed with high school musical love it keep writing

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on May 23, 2010
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My name is Heather Schultz. I love to read and write poems. I am 14yrs old. My Bff (aka sister) is Katlynn Feller. I have a younger sister named Courtney. I alos have a younger brother named Charles. .. more..

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