secert of life and because of you??????????????????????????????????

this is because of you

Why are you doing to me.

But I really don't know why.

That I cry.

Because of you.

Now I know every secret you told me.

Now I cry for shame.

And it is because of youI am now at the edge.

Because of you,

I am soo for from home.

Because of you.

That I am in a secret dream.

And it is soooooooooo,

Because of you.

Secret of life is so hard.

And it always because of you.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

It is hard when we gave everything to find out we wasted our energy and time. The poem is very sad. We must be careful to who we open up to in a life. I have many things hidden. Never to be told. Poem is powerful. There is wisdom in your words. Trust few people in a life with your heart and secrets. A excellent poem.

Coyote

[chaotic katie]

i loved it it is very good

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

Not sure yet i think you may want to check this poem again it has some misspelled words just saying. By the way the creativity was and is great and very so deep in the meaning of the soul and pain for some one.