LAST BREATH

nothing can be more beautiful than to die in arms of a loved one

There was something there 

in that gloomy dark night,

The only person reckoning my thoughts 

were you,

Shining like a star,

Blinking at me,

Smiling as I see,

I knew you would always be there for me,

Just like that star in that gloomy night,

My support was by my side,

Holding my hand tight,

and the pain started to disappear in the air,

I wanted to say something to you,

all that you mean to me,

But you already know,

cause it's exactly same as you do for me,

Even though i feel like a thorn pricking my heart,

My soul repairs it through your smile,

Passing the dark clouds above me,

Please keep smiling till i close my eyes,

and let out my last breath,

Lying in your arms till last,

Seeing the best smile in the universe,

That might be the best moments,

Just before my Death.....

Reviews

[Bear]

A touching testament to the power of relationships, I know most people think love is the strongest bond but there are more life-long friendships which is what I really like about your poem it fits whether a lover or a friend, it appeals to both. Bravo! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[heartspeaks]

thank u soo much

[Im His Daughter]

Your submission is now read in the http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Nature%2C-Auroras%2C-Lights%2C-Trees%2C-Water%2C-Outdoors-Contest/54059/ please stay tuned for the winning poems. Thank you for your entry.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this made my heart shrink...such a beautiful and sad poem!....

[heartspeaks]

Thank you wajiha

[Najam Us Saher]

I hope your thoughts never change. That's all I want to say.

[Mr.Writer]

Awe... this is tearful... how sweet... having a loved one beside you is the best gift you could possibly get :)

[heartspeaks]

yeah..true that... thanks

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[Hebe]

Beautiful words and the emotion came through my screen ... I felt the sadness but I also felt the love... great write!

[heartspeaks]

thank u so much... glad u liked it.