hurt

The more i think. The more i hate myself and i hate the way i hurt you. The way i know to push your buttons. So i push and push till we fight. I sometimes wonder why you are with me. Is there any real reason that you stay with me? Is love the only thing keeping you with me? Is there something more? This i cant figure out sometimes i think i have figured out but somethin goes wrong with that idea

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This really is a heartfelt story. The questions raised in the story were good. I know how you feel and I know it's hard, but good job at writing this. Thanks for sharing. :)

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regardless on grammatical error, this is a heartfelt read, well done.

[Dinesh Sairam]

For 100 words contest? ;) Interesting, I think I should write one too. But I've to say, for poems, the shorter the better. But for stories, the longer the better :) But, you've done a fine job here :) Keep writing.

[Ashley.M.E]

first off "i" should always be capitalized. It's one of my only pet peeves. "cant" shouuld be can't. "somethin" should be something. It's a meaningful little thought, I couldn't call it a story per-say, but I could tell it come from your heart.