The Bear

The Bear

A Poem by heartbreakqueen
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My first poem

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The crisp, winter night,
Empty of Bliss
He takes a step forward,
Determined not to miss,
The sound he is searching for
But takes a sharp breath of air,
Not but a meter behind him
Stands tall, the bear.

© 2012 heartbreakqueen


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This is a wonderfully written and flowing poem that is simply intruiging. I love how you have a rhyme scheme and it's very descriptive.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love it. This is amazing for your first poem. You should write more...or maybe not..you might make us all feel bad...nah keep writing:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is amazing, like this write alot

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is really good for your first one!:) you have good descriptions and nice punctuation, especially in the last line. Can't wait for your next one;)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 30, 2012
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