Him

Another love story. <3

 

When I stare at you,

I feel something I've never felt before,

I used to feel undying love,

But now I'm not so sure

 

For now I've been feeling something else,

Remorse,

Regret,

Hatred,

You've broken my heart and for that you will pay,

 

I trusted you with everything I had,

I gave you all my love,

You were my first kiss,

My first love,

And now my first enemy,

 

It's time I say goodbye,

Finally free myself from your torturous grasp

It's time to leave,

and forget you,

forever.

Reviews

[paradise]

Good poem its a good love story I must say. Really caught my attentiionn

[Protect Me Demons That ..]

Hahaha this was cute. I likee :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Good poem. I liked this as well. I love the concept of it. Good job. Thanks for sharing.

[Akujisha]

Chilly babe, chilly. But since you made the dude your enemy, put some venom in the last lines. Like...instead of just saying goodbye, watch him wither and die..hehe

[Naomi Roseღ]

Finally you wrote a poem, girl! Haha. I liked thisssss. But I have to know who is this mysterious "him"? This was awesome, Evelynn.
Love ya!