when The Time Is Right

For my son

You might fail a thousand times
But you can always stand and walk
Move on from things that made you cry
From those that block and mock

You are young and carefree, I know
You sing and dance, you play your game
I see your smile, I hear you laugh
Do not lose your hope and flame

Today might not be your time, my dear
But just move on, hold on to fight
Always keep the light to get your prize
Somehow, someday when the time is right

Author's Note

I will always be here to support you.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Poet.
"Today might not be your time, my dear
But just move on, hold on to fight
Always keep the light to get your prize
Somehow, someday when the time is right"
The above lines. Great wisdom. Sometime failing lead us where we support to be. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Dhaye]

Thank you, Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear friend.

[Tom]

Sage advice in fine poetic form, these rallying words galvanise the soul and put fight in the heart!

A delightful poem, embossed with strong maternal devotion! ❤️

[Dhaye]

Thank you for reading my work, Tom.

[gabrielle]

There's nothing I could say on the format and structure as it well-done. The substance, on the other hand, is something I can relate with. Defeat builds character. What kind of character? It depends on the value instilled in the child.

[Dhaye]

Thank you, Gab.

[Dhaye]

Thank you, Gab.