Never Give Up

Never Give Up

A Poem by Dhaye
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A writing exercise

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When the road seems rough today
Just move on and don't delay
Do not hide but learn to play
Do not fear of what they say

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When the sky now pours the rain
Like the tears when you're in vain
Life won't always give you pain
Time will come that you will gain

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When you feel the darkest night
Like no one is at your sight
Don't give up to find The Light
Never stop to do what's right

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Never give up, please do not stop
Just fill the space and bridge the gap
Finish the race till final lap
Keep on moving, never give up.

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© 2016 Dhaye


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Dhaye
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Giving up lies within ourselves which makes things really crucial and spirals down so fast. Never give up even if we may get a chance to victory we should be able to see the battle itself as victory and the success at the end as crown for not giving up. So glad to read the very encouraging poem, excellent job done

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Linda.



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I agree with the below lines.
"Never give up, please do not stop
Just fill the space and bridge the gap
Finish the race till final lap
Keep on moving, never give up. "
The above lines are needed words to live by. Thank you Dhaye for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dhaye

7 Years Ago

Ye, sir. We should not give up. Thank you for the kind words
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

I agree and you are welcome dear friend.
Giving up lies within ourselves which makes things really crucial and spirals down so fast. Never give up even if we may get a chance to victory we should be able to see the battle itself as victory and the success at the end as crown for not giving up. So glad to read the very encouraging poem, excellent job done

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Linda.
If that is a writing exercise than your creativity is in great shape.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

8 Years Ago

Thank you, sir
As has been said, hope springs eternal. What a gentle uplifting poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Gab
beautiful poem of keeping home alive, never quitting....life when it gets bad can always turn around...

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

8 Years Ago

Thank you, sir j
A nice encouraging poem that spoke to me on a rather discouraging day. Very nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

8 Years Ago

Glad that this one is encouraging for you, Eddie. Thanks for reading.
A very positive and uplifting poem. The message is good and relevant midst anxiety and despair. You give hope a voice and strength...Excellent, ma'm...:)......................

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dhaye

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Sami
Dhaye

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Sami
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are welcome. ....:)))))

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Dhaye
Dhaye

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