Out of Place

I start to over-think again
When I see things between us
Like in a Tug-Of-War
I feel like
I am out of your world
I am out of place
Like a small weed
In the midst
of beautiful flowers

Author's Note

I have to give credit to a friend's piece entitled "Weeds" because it was first written with almost the same subject.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think you might have meant "Tug-Of-War....but yes....we realize that we just aren't a fit for the other person...that all we create with them is a tug-of-war of feelings...and we feel very out of place...

but maybe we aren't really weeds, just different kinds of flowers that don't mesh well in the same garden with the other.

[Dhaye]

Thanks for checking 'tug', sir. Thank you for reading and sharing your insights here. I really appreciate it.

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Man this piece hit. I just lost someone because I over taught things to much. I felt just like you described like I did not belong in her world. Like a hideous thing next a beautiful person. Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem. Loved it. N.

[Dhaye]

Over-thinking is a killer- killer of dreams and hopes and good relationship. Do not let it win over love.
Thanks for reading my piece.

[gabrielle]

When we keep on seeing our differences, there will be sort of tug of war...

[Dhaye]

Oo nga. How are you na? We rarely meet on here at the same time.
Thanks, ganda.

[Eddie Davis]

Nicely worded and very sad to think of oneself as a weed. Well done.

[Dhaye]

Thank you, Eddie.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

At at least one time in our lives we all feel like that weed for not every garden suits us. And we are all a blooming flower to at least one person.

[Dhaye]

Thanks for the kind words, sir.

[AYVID N]

When a person is very special to us or assumes an amazingly larger than life image in our eyes, we do feel as weeds sometimes. The feeling is captured so well Dhaye.

[Dhaye]

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts here, Divya.

[AYVID N]

You are welcome Dhaye. Have a lovely evening 🙋

[Dhaye]

Thanks for reminding me.. sleeping time now. Lol. Thanks again. Good night!

[AYVID N]

Goodnight Dhaye...🌜