Love In The Sea

A scene that keeps on repeating....

I dream of us making sweet things in the sea
There's romance all around just for you and me

Imagine us walking hand in hand on a beach
Then afterwards chasing,  oh,  you're so easy to reach

Like  your own magic wand, you hold my hand
With the love and the romance, we sit on the sand

You kiss me on forehead that shows of respect
But the next kiss,  of course,  is what I also expect 

You help me to stand and hold me on my hips
Now it's time to give you my sweet candy lips

You raise me up then and swing me in the air
We both shout "I love you" while air plays with my hair

We then lie on the sand and you kiss me once more
It is our longest kiss this time on this shore

Oh,  I am not shy nor afraid anymore
This love  we have now will stay forevermore

Author's Note

The beach is like the heart
Where waves come and go
But still those waves are the water
That is forever a part of the sea

Reviews

[Eddie Davis]

A lovely, very visual poem, Dhaye,
We sit on the sand still you hold my hand
The love and the romance are our own magic wands

is a bit troublesome, though as HAND and WAND (which rhymes with POND) don't rhyme, but I think you could rearrange it to work, something like:

Like magic wands you're holding my hand,
love and romance as we sit in the sand,

This would keep the words and flow, and since you mention SAND with does rhyme with HAND, that would work. Other than that, it is a lovely piece that makes you want to be on a beach.

[Dhaye]

Lol. I overlooked that part, Eddie.
Thank you for pointing it out. I will edit it now. Thanks for the suggested couplet. God bless!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

always shyness to start, that first kiss, the anticipation, the forehead kiss first and then the one waited for...and it is all that was anticipated...and the sea roars with approval and the waves wash against the shore....

[Dhaye]

Thank you, sir. I agree with your take on this piece.

[highonwords]

ate dhaye, you sound truly in love and inspired in this poem - who is the lucky guy ate? :)

regards,
steph

[Dhaye]

Ganon? Pag dark poetry, bigo. Pag love poem, in love. Hehe.
Thanks, steph

[highonwords]

you're welcome, ate dhaye :)

steph