Love In The Sea

A scene that keeps on repeating....

I dream of us making sweet things in the sea
There's romance all around just for you and me

Imagine us walking hand in hand on a beach
Then afterwards chasing,  oh,  you're so easy to reach

Like  your own magic wand, you hold my hand
With the love and the romance, we sit on the sand

You kiss me on forehead that shows of respect
But the next kiss,  of course,  is what I also expect 

You help me to stand and hold me on my hips
Now it's time to give you my sweet candy lips

You raise me up then and swing me in the air
We both shout "I love you" while air plays with my hair

We then lie on the sand and you kiss me once more
It is our longest kiss this time on this shore

Oh,  I am not shy nor afraid anymore
This love  we have now will stay forevermore

Author's Note

The beach is like the heart
Where waves come and go
But still those waves are the water
That is forever a part of the sea

Reviews

[Eddie Davis]

A lovely, very visual poem, Dhaye,
We sit on the sand still you hold my hand
The love and the romance are our own magic wands

is a bit troublesome, though as HAND and WAND (which rhymes with POND) don't rhyme, but I think you could rearrange it to work, something like:

Like magic wands you're holding my hand,
love and romance as we sit in the sand,

This would keep the words and flow, and since you mention SAND with does rhyme with HAND, that would work. Other than that, it is a lovely piece that makes you want to be on a beach.

[Dhaye]

Lol. I overlooked that part, Eddie.
Thank you for pointing it out. I will edit it now. Thanks for the suggested couplet. God bless!

[Shy Joe]

Finally some good poetry. Good, fun, easy to read. Create more of this poetry :P

[Dhaye]

Thank you, sir!

[ms. barrie]

this is lyrical loveliness at it's best...you perfectly captured the seductive spell
of the sea...I believe we {most}…all fall under. very tender write that
brightens the reader's heart with a kiss. love the romantic word weaving
that makes your mind dance. beautiful ink drops your pen spills,
Dhaye. thank you for sharing
~ X - barrie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
BEAUTIFUL..........
almost felt like i was on the beach......
well rhymed....
i loved it!!!
:)

[Dhaye]

Thank you, Pushkar.

[Happy hours]

very mesmerizing. I can imagine the beautiful scenery showing love while reading your poem...
thanks for sharing.. :)

[Dhaye]

Thank you for reading and liking it.

[Lydia Shutter]

The beach....my favorite place to find inspiration for a poem. Ultra romantic write, Dh. The imagery is dreamy. Just magical! Lydi**

[Dhaye]

Thanks for dropping by and for the kind words, Lydi. :)

[FJ Davis]

Lovely and dreamily romantic.
Class not crass.
Definitely, a higher love!

[Dhaye]

Thanks so much, Frank.

[AYVID N]

A very romantic and lyrical poem on love amidst the beauty of nature. The sea has an almost primal effect on love. Great writing Dhaye 💕

[Dhaye]

Thanks a lot, Divya. 🌻🌻🌸🌸

[AYVID N]

I enjoyed it so much Dhaye. You are welcome.

[Pax]

ahh, a very beautiful piece... it makes love easy to achieved... though it requires hard work and passionate dedication...like always, you've been as romantic as i remember pretty friend...

[Dhaye]

It really requires hard work and passionate dedication but it's worth it. You won't really understand that unless you find true love.
Thank you, Pax.

[Pax]

i know right, i don't even know how love feels like at times... and you're very welcome, Dhaye...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I am such a hopeless romantic so all I can do is *sigh* after reading this sweet poem.

[Dhaye]

Thanks for reading this, sir.