Girl in Pink

Pure fiction written for 10 Words I Give contest.

Wearing pink Ruckus shirt and Levis sexy shorts 

She looks so daring that makes his devilish smile 

Nobody in this place could make him dance and sing 

Fishing women in the sea makes him crazy for a while 

There are moments that his thoughts are scrambled in 

While the moon is hiding in the night, he wishes for a sign 

Whoever comes to him this time will magically shift his heart 

On a solitary moment of dreaming like this, that girl in pink is fine!

Author's Note

The 10 given words:
P I N K
S C R A M B L E
L E V I S
R U K U S
M O O N
F I S H I N G
D E V I L I S H
D A R I N G
S H I F T
S O L I T A R Y

Reviews

[E G TEN]

Hello friend, somehow I can see the Barretto sisters in their pink shirts and tight levis shorts,
But I guess that's just me ;D you did very well on this challenge, and placing all the words
Where they matter and counts the most.. Great Job, very cool, Thanks EG

[Dhaye]

Thank you, kabayan.

[FJ Davis]

Quite creative and nicely conveyed.
Vivid imagery makes this a fascinating read!

[Dhaye]

Thank you for reading and for the kind words.

[Wicahpi]

I imagine the scene and the thoughts swirling around your character's mind.
Reminded me of a movie I just watched, "30 Degrees in February" somewhat.
Thank you for your entry into the "10 Words I Give" contest :)

[Dhaye]

I should thank you because your contests really motivated me to write. No writer's block in your prompt. Lol. Thanks again.

[Wicahpi]

You are so very welcome! I'm glad to hear this :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, most guys...don't look past the outer appearance...but most often what's inside is much sexier...

[Dhaye]

Yes, I agree with that, sir. Thank you.

[gabrielle]

I am imagining Daisy Duke in this write. Guys usually take notice of physical attributes of a woman.

[Dhaye]

Same with women. Physical attraction first, that comes deeper when there is already connection of souls.
Thanks, Gab.

[Eddie Davis]

Neat, a brain challenger, well done.

[Dhaye]

Thank you, Edddie. Contests give me chances to write as an exercise.