I Will

Musing on positive feelings of hope, love and joy

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I will take care of you

Love you endlessly

Understand all your flaws

I will help you reach your dreams

Support you in your passion

Will respect if you need a pause

You will never feel alone

For I am with you by heart

Your spirit is with me always

You will not feel uncomfortable

When you are with me 

We will be happy, nights and days

When you are sad and tired

My smile will enlighten you

As my hugs and kisses will make you warm

There's no other place

That you can find this feeling

But here in my arms

I will do everything

I will give my all

For you are my only one

I will be yours forever

Body, soul and spirit

Because I love you, my precious man.

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Author's Note

It's great to wake up with all of these positivites...

*photo shared by a friend from FB

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for the emotion of love.
"I will be yours forever
Body, soul and spirit
Because I love you, my precious man."
True love is never forgotten and a part of us forever. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for reading and sharing your insight.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[abderrahmane dakir]

It's so affection with a great respect and the courtesy. Your feeling is unique. Your words come from the purely heart. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks a lot, abd.

[NeiL ArandA]

The poem is written in free verse format . Dhaye I didnt see any metaphors here . You are telling us in plain language . Show us what you are saying by adding some metaphors .

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You didn't notice the rhyming at the end of the verse? The style is...each verse is just a line if written in another format like in couplets...


"I will take care of you, love you endlessly, understand all your flaws
I will help you reach your dreams, support you in your passion, will respect if you need a pause

You will never feel alone for I am with you by heart, your spirit is with me always
You will not feel uncomfortable when you are with me ,we will be happy, nights and days

When you are sad and tired, my smile will enlighten you as my hugs and kisses will make you warm
There's no other place that you can find this feeling but here in my arms

I will do everything, I will give my all for you are my only one
I will be yours forever, body, soul and spirit because I love you, my precious man."

I know it is a light poem...just a light one when I woke up one day being inspired from all the positiveness around me. But will try to add something...
Thanks, Neil.

[NeiL ArandA]

Ok I see it now . In the rhyming style. Metaphors is not really needed.

[NeiL ArandA]

But I would like to see you experiment on metaphors. You have been using rhyme for the longest. I have used this too when I tried creating a piece " The Lonely Sparrow " Then I saw about the big buzz about free verse. I thought it was impossible to use it given my poor english. Then I study the style of Elisa Laura and Kalypso. They are natural free verse writer.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I have a free verse at HP chosen by Bill Hughes to be read as spoken word. Try to listen. The link was shared at FB.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I have also metaphors in other poems. But my style varies as I learned different forms of poetry. Metaphor is just one of the 20+ literary devices a poet can use. Thank you, Neil.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Try ko gawa ng metaphors ang gamit ko, Neil. I will do something like that one of these days.

[NeiL ArandA]

I like to see it oneday Dhaye. You have the experience to do it. Your TAKING FLIGHT and THE PLANT is one of your best piece. I always brag about that because I see something their that its just a tip of the ice berg.

[Tom]

Consuming, candid, contemporary, consummate, complete & crystal clear, or to put it another way..Perfect!

Bravo Dhaye !

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for all the letter C's plus P. Hehe.
I really appreciate your inspiring comment, Tom.

[gabrielle]

What a tender piece, dhaye. Your sweetness is reflected in this piece. Your significant other is truly blessed to have you :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, gab.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and must be great to be the person to whom this was addressed....

very tender and emotional words.

j.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much, sir j.