I just saw them while walking In the park where I used to go A tall man and a short one Walks hand in hand, they show The tall man kissed his lady The lady smiled at him She kissed him back and smiled again What a romantic team!
And then I walked some more steps I saw another pair A black man and a fair girl They show much love and care The man seems feeding her food Another romantic scene For she's there on his lap Like a baby girl, I mean
I just smiled then I walked again To see a new story The man is old, the woman's young But it's the sweetest pair to see The man's holding her shaking hand With tears rolling on her face A ring he's putting in her finger With a vow so full of grace!
And so I walked and walked again Like moving round and round My eyes are full of sweetest tears My feet float from the ground My heart now bleeds for I'm amazed For love's a mystery Those scenes will be forevermore Like forever you and me.
I agree dear Poet.
"For love's a mystery
Those scenes will be forevermore
Like forever you and me. "
When love is near us. Most wonderful days of our life. The good description took the reader with you. Thank you dear friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
I agree dear Poet.
"For love's a mystery
Those scenes will be forevermore
Like forever you and me. "
When love is near us. Most wonderful days of our life. The good description took the reader with you. Thank you dear friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
love *true love* knows no bounds...and sincere hearts fall in love with each other's souls,
not one's appearance.
that said...this is quite uplifting...touching poem...yet with a subtle sense of whimsy.
i enjoyed the enriched detail your pen captured in this. definitely leaves a smile upon one's face.
thank you for sharing, Dhaye -- miss. barrie
Watching loving couples in our world is a wonderful way to pass the time. No one can tell why two people are drawn to one another, but they are. As long as they are happy and they smile sweetly at one another, who are we to judge their love? What a beautiful poem this is, Dh. Lydi**
love is not only a mystery but it is for everyone...even what might seem like the oddest matchups...differences in height, color whatever...those don't matter...love is love.
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"Love is love", yes. No reason for love but it is what you feel.
Thank you so much, sir J.
Not for bitter singles, no. Haha. But yeah, love should be everywhere. I like the different loves shown in here. We may judge some couples for being seemingly mismatched, but true love transcends race, age, distance, etc. I miss you, ate. Have a good night. :D
Really? Haha. I miss my little cafe sis, too. You're right, true love transcends race, age, or dista.. read moreReally? Haha. I miss my little cafe sis, too. You're right, true love transcends race, age, or distance. Don't be bitter. LOL. You are so young.
BTW, have you taken the LET last summer? Are you teaching now?
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And thank you for spending your time in this piece.
9 Years Ago
I didn't. I will most likely take it September next year. Kinda messed up this year. Nope, no immedi.. read moreI didn't. I will most likely take it September next year. Kinda messed up this year. Nope, no immediate plans on being a teacher soon. I want to explore other jobs first. :)
Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream.
I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me.
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