FLAMES

FLAMES

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
"

Friend.Love.Angry.Married.Enemy.Sweetheart.

"

Simple game that I want to play
Simple answer to be okay
Simple word that would make my day
That would tell us if we should stay.

               F for Friends, maybe right for us
               L for Lovers, no need to discuss
               A for Anger, do I have to fuss?
               M for Married, there's a big, big sus
               E for Enemies , could anyone be a cuss?
               S for Sister, could be a strong truss.

Funny that I tried once then get an E
Enemies? Oh no, that couldn't be!
The second try got F, maybe good to see
On the third try, finally an M has stopped me...




© 2015 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Reviews

This is great! Nicely done and witty to an extent. I have never seen a acrostic embedded in another, wonder if there is a term for it. I love the concept though.

I always seem to end up with either A or E, and maybe some L in between * coy blush * ...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hahahaha. I had a notebook in highschool, which was only intended for "FLAMES". :) :) :)


Posted 8 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

:) :) :)
High school days remind me of FLAMES, BITAY (hangman), SOS, dama, sungka, jack ston.. read more

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

168 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on October 23, 2015
Last Updated on October 23, 2015
Tags: flames, friend, love, game


Author

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



About
Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

Writing