Love's Debut

Love's Debut

A Chapter by Dhaye
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an entry

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There is one thing you must decide-

Do not deny what you now feel

Delay your plans, forget your pride

Don’t push with doubt, just show what’s real

On love’s debut, you cannot hide.




© 2015 Dhaye


Author's Note

Dhaye
For Take 5 Challenge: Using words decide, deny, delay, doubt, and debut in 5 lines


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Wow, Dhaye! This is just amazing. A real masterpiece, if you ask me. Short and concise but so full of depth! And a beautiful message. I love it! It's just perfect. It's going straight in my library. I'm so sorry you haven't heard from me in a while but ive been away. But this was a beautiful piece to come back to.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Michael.



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you did a really good job with this challenge...it flows nicely and all the words fit in very well.

jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for spending your time to my work, sir.
Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for spending your time to my work, sir.
Wow, Dhaye! This is just amazing. A real masterpiece, if you ask me. Short and concise but so full of depth! And a beautiful message. I love it! It's just perfect. It's going straight in my library. I'm so sorry you haven't heard from me in a while but ive been away. But this was a beautiful piece to come back to.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Michael.
You can try to run from love but it will always catch you. Nice one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Sir!
It's amazing how you did that, good job, it weaves a good poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Eddie.

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Dhaye
Dhaye

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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