YOU TOLD ME

YOU TOLD ME

A Poem by Dhaye
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I always believe

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You told me that I’m a glass bird
I brought shining rays to your place
Like you see me as your light,  my love
I am a glass bird to fill your space

You told me I am that  glass bird
With that I know you'll take care of me
Because once that I am broken
There's no more smile that you can see

You told me that I am worth the wait
Your love is deep and real
No test can weaken the strength in you
To fight for what you feel

You told me I am your flower
And that I give the scent you love
For you I am your angel,  too
A gift sent from up above

You told me every little thing
With that I fell in love again
With the same man who wrote me songs
The reason why I hold this pen

You told me how much you love me
And I thank God for this gift
You told me to have faith,  not fear
No storm could make us adrift.

© 2015 Dhaye


Author's Note

Dhaye
Forever love <3 <3 <3


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Well done, Dhaye, a person's feelings for someone else are indeed fragile, like a glass bird, and your choice of words are wonderful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Eddie.
I would to learn this poem by my heart. It's wonderful poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

9 Years Ago

Thanks, I will return the favor when I go back.
if love is strong enough, we will both handle each other's heart with care.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, sir.
You secure each stanza with a vindication...as if the pitch resonates more each time...that is clear in the lines as the voice speaks out...to the roof tops...in the verse...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Glen.
Glen Yumang Manese

9 Years Ago

You're welcome...I did not know there was music with this...I had my speakers off..

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Added on February 16, 2015
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Dhaye
Dhaye

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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