The simple things become the important things.
"A simple touch, a goodnight kiss
Could warm a frozen world
A soulful hug, I'll always miss
Surely when I get old "
I agree with the above lines. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
I wrote one about what a simple act of kindness can do will check and see if you've read it if not will send request.You have great rhythm and flow in this poem
"Another Day" and I think I sent you a read request and you're very welcome
9 Years Ago
Ah, sorry...I cannot receive any read request because it has been closed because of flooding of requ.. read moreAh, sorry...I cannot receive any read request because it has been closed because of flooding of request before.
The simple things become the important things.
"A simple touch, a goodnight kiss
Could warm a frozen world
A soulful hug, I'll always miss
Surely when I get old "
I agree with the above lines. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
To be kind and compassionate in life is not that difficult. You never know how much happiness you can add to another person's life with a simple smile or kind word. What a warm and wonderful write this is, Dh. I liked it. Lydi**
Living life gracefully is an art. Sometimes simple gestures of selflessness can go a long way in making our world a better place. Great sentiments very well expressed. Much appreciated Dhaye.
Very nicely done, I love the flow of the poem. You accidentally used 'warmth' for 'warm' in "Could warm a frozen world". I agree with the sentiment of this poem. Kindness to others is always the best philosophy of life to have.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you so much especially the correction you mentioned, Eddie. I was writing the poem on-the-spot.. read moreThank you so much especially the correction you mentioned, Eddie. I was writing the poem on-the-spot and I often made mistakes in grammar. I am on my phone but will try to edit that part. Thnks agai Eddie. Hope you will always help me check my works.
i love the brevity and the optimism of this piece. We never really know how an act of kindness could change another one's journey.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
I hope I did not give you any reading problem regarding the font size of my latest writings posted .. read moreI hope I did not give you any reading problem regarding the font size of my latest writings posted through this phone.
Many thanks to you, Gab.
Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream.
I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me.
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