Perfect Match

Could We?

Yes, you and I could be a match
Each one can patch
Space we possess
Or clean our mess

Oh, you and I, it is a dream
Like radiant beam
I feel for us
Not comes to pass

Yet you and I, I wish could be
Love I can see
Your heart’s for me
Perfect, are we?

Author's Note

The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables. The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff

Credits from: http://www.shadowpoetry.com

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"You and I, I wish could be
Like the love in your eyes that I can see
If the warmth in your touch is not for me
Then we couldn't be that perfect match, could we?"
The questions of love. Ever going test to know true love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dhaye]

Thanks a lot, CP.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such a lovely piece, Dhaye...

wow, the idea of seeing love in another's eyes, and then realizing that sparkle may not be for me....

reminds me of the Bread song "Diary"---

i wonder if there is such a thing as a perfect match...i feel there are soulmates...but those don't always gel when together.

this is a very visual piece of poetry...like a dream we want to be real.

[Dhaye]

But sometimes dreams come true...
Thank you for your insights, Sir, and your piece which has motivated me to write this one.

[Sami Khalil]

"Not just a memory that comes to pass

You and I, I wish could be"

A wonderful pen and verse. You touch the deep. Excellent...:)...........

[Dhaye]

Thank you, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........................

[WhiteCanarie]

This absolutely beautiful. It's entirely relatable and understanding. Your use of vocabulary paints a gorgeous picture without cluttering it with confusion. The flow of the poem is beautiful as well, which is half the ingredients of a great poem. With little words you conveyed so much meaning and emotion, leaving it for the imagination to take hold and really think about.

[Dhaye]

Thank you, WC. :)

[WhiteCanarie]

You're welcome.