LET ME LIVE

LET ME LIVE

A Chapter by Dhaye
"

with your words

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Just let me love you, please let me live
Care not if there's something to receive
Oh, let me love you from where I stand
I dream to walk with you hand-in-hand.

Can you let me love you through your words?
For they create my musical chords
Can you let me hear your precious voice?
With its symphony I could rejoice.

My dear, let me love you through your aims
Your main principles that set the flames
I love your thoughts like a precious gold
With such greatest story ever told.

Let me love you until forever
Don't break this off, oh please don't sever
Care not if there's something to receive
Let me love you, oh please let me live.


© 2014 Dhaye


Author's Note

Dhaye
Just a random scribble with constant 9 syllables per line.


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I like the line "let me love you , oh let me live. " Seems to me as if "love" and "live" are held as synonymous terms which I couldn't help but agree. Only in living shall we express love and only in loving shall we experience life.

By the way, just a minor thing, Ate. I think you mean "its symphony" instead of " it's symphony." Also, I would very much like to watch your video in your featured poem but I can't access YT right now. I'm sure it's good, though. Best wishes!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Ah, yes. Thanks for sharing your thoughts here and of course for pointing out the typo. =)



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My dear, let me love you through your aims
Your main principles that set the flames
I love your thoughts like a precious gold
With such greatest story ever told.

An outstanding write. You are such a beautiful thoughter. Love this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot.
Beautifully done, Dhaye.
I enjoyed this one much.
Rick

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thanks, r. I appreciate your visit on my page today. God bless!
"Let me love you, oh please let me live."
The above lines are the truest of love truth. When love is allowed to bloom. We are truly alive. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thanks, CP.
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
I like the line "let me love you , oh let me live. " Seems to me as if "love" and "live" are held as synonymous terms which I couldn't help but agree. Only in living shall we express love and only in loving shall we experience life.

By the way, just a minor thing, Ate. I think you mean "its symphony" instead of " it's symphony." Also, I would very much like to watch your video in your featured poem but I can't access YT right now. I'm sure it's good, though. Best wishes!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Ah, yes. Thanks for sharing your thoughts here and of course for pointing out the typo. =)
That was quite nice, Dhaye, as was the photograph. Good to see that you have patched up your differences with your Muse! ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Eddie. Yes. I did it. Hope I can still be here now that I will be busy in school.
Wowza, that last line really packs a punch in the heart, a brilliant way to finish off this brilliantly melancholy poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thank you, sir!
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome.

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