I LOVE THE WAY YOU LOVE ME

Just a scribble with 7/6 syllables

I love the way you love me
I love the way you kiss
I love the way you whisper
And that I truly miss

I love all things about you
Even the flaws you have
For when I love somebody
All I can feel is love

I love to think about you
I know that you are mine
I want to hug and kiss you
This love's truly divine

I love you till tomorrow
For always I will care
I'll keep your name in my heart
Forever love I swear!

Author's Note

Just a simple poem. It's not easy to escape from a writer's block.

Reviews

[Clockwork]

Well, I think welcoming this kind of love, letting it filter through your writing mind, really helps erode writers block. Even though its a simple poem, you can feel the love here. It's the classical romantic kind, the sort that blots about the bad stories on the evening news. Glad I saw this one today, it made me smile.

[Dhaye]

Thanks, clockwork. Glad this one made you smile.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful flow of thoughts. Love make us kings and queens in the arms of kind lovers. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry for love.
Coyote

[Dhaye]

Thank you so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. Always a pleasure to fall into your words.

[gabrielle]

I love the simplicity of your words. It's very light and straight to the point.

[Dhaye]

Thanks, gab. =)

[gabrielle]

welcome dhaye. btw wonderful collab with pax... musically inclined ka talaga. ayoko magcomment sa profile page mo ang linis eh.

[Dhaye]

Hehe. Mahilig ako mag-general cleaning. Damay lahat. Pwede naman doon, grabe. Ganon pala yun. Paano mo nalaman may collab kami?

[gabrielle]

from the other website, of course. =)

[Dhaye]

Hehe. Nakita ko na. Thanks. =)

[Aethereal]

This poem is a sweet declaration of endearment. “that’s” on line four should be “that” Your six syllable meter in verse one is different from your six syllable meter in verses two, three, and four, this is alright if that’s what you intended. Combining “truly” with “divine” gives you 1/0/0/1 meter instead of 1/0/1/0 meter.

[Dhaye]

Thank you, Ae. I always appreciate your help. I'll fix it soon when I get back with my laptop.

[Laura Harrison]

This is a very cute and beautiful poem I love it!

[Dhaye]

Thank you"

[Eddie Davis]

Well, it looks like you broke free from the block. A very nice, upbeat poem, Dhaye.

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Eddie. I can't say I'm already free from it because the real Dhaye can make 3 poems a day. Lol. I have no idea again now. Maybe I don't have have a muse right now.

[Eddie Davis]

She might be on vacation, or perhaps she wants you to write something else.

[Dhaye]

When I feel like this, I want to close again my account...but I control my fingers in clicking in that button. LOL.
What should I write? I really have no concept right now. Just staying here for some minutes... =)

[Eddie Davis]

Write about not being able to think of anything to write. Whatever you do, don't leave Writer's Cafe, Dhaye. Everyone has Writer's Block. I've had a mild case for 3 weeks now. Just hang in there, you are too talented to give up.

[Dhaye]

I won't give up. My account has been closed and opened so many times. It's just like a door...you close, you open. Hehe. But I won't do it this time...
Thanks again, Eddie. You're so kind though I'm not an avid reader of your books. LOL.
God bless!