TWO SENRYU's

STAY

 

Sing me a new song

Show me your new photograph

I will stay the same.

 

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FORCE

 

Push me or pull me?

Force me to stop or resume?

It depends on you…

Author's Note

Senryu
Senryu (also called human haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. Senryu is usually written in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions. They possess no references to the natural world and thus stand out from nature/seasonal haiku.

Reviews

[Eddie Davis]

I liked both of them, you are a master of the Senryu and got me hooked on them.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Eddie. I'll sign off now to focus in starting my fantasy story (short story only) and I hope you can spare a little time to check it when I post it here. LOL. I am already requesting it to you because you are good in that genre...only if you have free time. Thanks and God bless!

[Eddie Davis]

Absolutely, I will read and review it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Well done on both accounts…

The first one is wonderfully rebellious, the second is like a psychological game.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks a lot. =)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome :)